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How to Clear training overview
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The existing Linux\* ecosystem causes user challenges due to long intervals
between :abbr:`OS (operating system)` updates, which leads to large update
downloads. Users are also frustrated when managing complicated component
dependencies. |CLOSIA| solves these problems by:
The existing Linux\* ecosystem can be challenging to users because of long
intervals between :abbr:`OS (operating system)` updates, which leads to large
update downloads. Users can also be frustrated when managing complicated
component dependencies. |CLOSIA| solves these problems by:
* Allowing you to update frequently, even multiple times per day
* Preventing you from combining incompatible components