From 78d4e0720aafd3fe1e769ed0f1a44af02042d409 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: MCamp859 Date: Thu, 26 Apr 2018 14:53:19 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Incorporated review feedback. Signed-off-by: MCamp859 --- source/clear-linux/reference/how-to-clear-overview.rst | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/source/clear-linux/reference/how-to-clear-overview.rst b/source/clear-linux/reference/how-to-clear-overview.rst index 060514d8..91862a29 100644 --- a/source/clear-linux/reference/how-to-clear-overview.rst +++ b/source/clear-linux/reference/how-to-clear-overview.rst @@ -3,10 +3,10 @@ How to Clear training overview ############################## -The existing Linux\* ecosystem causes user challenges due to long intervals -between :abbr:`OS (operating system)` updates, which leads to large update -downloads. Users are also frustrated when managing complicated component -dependencies. |CLOSIA| solves these problems by: +The existing Linux\* ecosystem can be challenging to users because of long +intervals between :abbr:`OS (operating system)` updates, which leads to large +update downloads. Users can also be frustrated when managing complicated +component dependencies. |CLOSIA| solves these problems by: * Allowing you to update frequently, even multiple times per day * Preventing you from combining incompatible components