diff --git a/source/clear-linux/reference/how-to-clear-overview.rst b/source/clear-linux/reference/how-to-clear-overview.rst index 060514d8..91862a29 100644 --- a/source/clear-linux/reference/how-to-clear-overview.rst +++ b/source/clear-linux/reference/how-to-clear-overview.rst @@ -3,10 +3,10 @@ How to Clear training overview ############################## -The existing Linux\* ecosystem causes user challenges due to long intervals -between :abbr:`OS (operating system)` updates, which leads to large update -downloads. Users are also frustrated when managing complicated component -dependencies. |CLOSIA| solves these problems by: +The existing Linux\* ecosystem can be challenging to users because of long +intervals between :abbr:`OS (operating system)` updates, which leads to large +update downloads. Users can also be frustrated when managing complicated +component dependencies. |CLOSIA| solves these problems by: * Allowing you to update frequently, even multiple times per day * Preventing you from combining incompatible components