cosmetic updates to the telemetry file

changes to the telemetry-enable-disable file based on review from Rodrigo
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Tom Leavitt
2017-10-09 13:52:29 -07:00
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parent 874f7d23fe
commit d052919209
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
.. _telemetry-enable-disable:
Enable and Disable Telemetry in Clear Linux
Enable and disable telemetry in Clear Linux
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|CLOSIA| includes a telemetry solution as part of the OS that records events
@@ -8,20 +8,20 @@ of interest and reports them back to the development team via the telemetrics
daemon, :command:`telemd`. This functionality is maintained in the
``telemetrics`` software bundle.
.. Note::
The telemetrics functionality adheres to `Intels privacy policies`_
regarding the collection and use of Personally Identifiable Information
(PII) and is Open Source. Specifically, no intentionally identifiable
.. note::
The telemetry functionality adheres to `Intels privacy policies`_
regarding the collection and use of :abbr:`PII (Personally Identifiable
Information)` and is open source. Specifically, no intentionally identifiable
information about the user or system owner is collected.
End users may enable or disable the telemetry component of |CL| or even
redirect where records go if they wish to collect records for themselves.
redirect where the records go if they wish to collect records for themselves.
Install the telemetry software bundle
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During the initial installation of |CL| you are requested to join the
Stability Enhancement Program and allow |CLOSIA| to collect anonymous reports
stability enhancement program and allow |CLOSIA| to collect anonymous reports
to improve system stability. If you chose not to join this program at that
time then the telemetry software bundle was not added to your system.
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ To start telemetry on your system run the following command:
This will enable and start the :command:`telemd` daemon and your system will
begin to send telemetry data to the server defined in the file
:file:`/etc/telemetrics/telemetrics.conf` and if this file does not exist it
:file:`/etc/telemetrics/telemetrics.conf`. If this file does not exist it
will use the file :file:`/usr/share/defaults/telemetrics/telemetrics.conf`.
Disable Telemetry
@@ -81,10 +81,10 @@ command and start the service:
sudo telemctl opt-in
This will remove the file :file:`/etc/telemetrics/opt-out` file if it exists
This will remove the file :file:`/etc/telemetrics/opt-out` file, if it exists,
and start the telemetry services.
.. Note::
.. note::
To opt-in but not immediately start telemetry services, you will need to
run the command :command:`sudo telemctl stop` after the :command:`opt-in`
command is entered. Once you are ready to start the service, enter the