diff --git a/source/clear-linux/guides/maintenance/Telemetry-Enable-Disable.rst b/source/clear-linux/guides/maintenance/Telemetry-Enable-Disable.rst
index d974444a..c9b566d2 100644
--- a/source/clear-linux/guides/maintenance/Telemetry-Enable-Disable.rst
+++ b/source/clear-linux/guides/maintenance/Telemetry-Enable-Disable.rst
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 .. _telemetry-enable-disable:
 
-Enable and Disable Telemetry in Clear Linux
+Enable and disable telemetry in Clear Linux
 ###########################################
 
 |CLOSIA| includes a telemetry solution as part of the OS that records events
@@ -8,20 +8,20 @@ of interest and reports them back to the development team via the telemetrics
 daemon, :command:`telemd`.  This functionality is maintained in the
 ``telemetrics`` software bundle.
 
-.. Note::
-	The telemetrics functionality adheres to `Intel’s privacy policies`_
-	regarding the collection and use of Personally Identifiable Information
-	(PII) and is Open Source. Specifically, no intentionally identifiable
+.. note::
+	The telemetry functionality adheres to `Intel’s privacy policies`_
+	regarding the collection and use of :abbr:`PII (Personally Identifiable
+	Information)` and is open source. Specifically, no intentionally identifiable
 	information about the user or system owner is collected.
 
 End users may enable or disable the telemetry component of |CL| or even
-redirect where records go if they wish to collect records for themselves.
+redirect where the records go if they wish to collect records for themselves.
 
 Install the telemetry software bundle
 *************************************
 
 During the initial installation of |CL| you are requested to join the
-Stability Enhancement Program and allow |CLOSIA| to collect anonymous reports
+stability enhancement program and allow |CLOSIA| to collect anonymous reports
 to improve system stability.  If you chose not to join this program at that
 time then the telemetry software bundle was not added to your system.
 
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ To start telemetry on your system run the following command:
 
 This will enable and start the :command:`telemd` daemon and your system will
 begin to send telemetry data to the server defined in the file
-:file:`/etc/telemetrics/telemetrics.conf` and if this file does not exist it
+:file:`/etc/telemetrics/telemetrics.conf`.  If this file does not exist it
 will use the file :file:`/usr/share/defaults/telemetrics/telemetrics.conf`.
 
 Disable Telemetry
@@ -81,10 +81,10 @@ command and start the service:
 
 	sudo telemctl opt-in
 	
-This will remove the file :file:`/etc/telemetrics/opt-out` file if it exists
+This will remove the file :file:`/etc/telemetrics/opt-out` file, if it exists,
 and start the telemetry services.
 
-.. Note::
+.. note::
 	To opt-in but not immediately start telemetry services, you will need to
 	run the command :command:`sudo telemctl stop` after the :command:`opt-in`
 	command is entered.  Once you are ready to start the service, enter the