6bbfade67d
Minor edits; formatting
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2018-05-22 20:26:59 -04:00
dc695cb69b
Edits from mvincerx review
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2018-05-22 06:55:26 -04:00
8bb164ba82
Edits to wp-install.rst
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2018-05-21 09:41:30 -04:00
1f8a538962
Merge pull request #134 from MCamp859/edits-multi-boot
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Copy edit of multi-boot for branding, grammar, and format.
2018-05-10 10:33:27 -07:00
2521ca7a41
Merge pull request #136 from MCamp859/edits-multi-boot-rhel
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Copy edit of multi-boot-rhel for branding, grammar, and format.
2018-05-10 10:33:02 -07:00
c06dbd66d4
Merge pull request #137 from MCamp859/edits-multi-boot-sles
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Copy edit of multi-boot-sles for branding, grammar, and format.
2018-05-10 10:32:42 -07:00
1cfaf8bbc1
Merge pull request #138 from MCamp859/edits-multi-boot-ubuntu
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Copy edit of multi-boot-ubuntu for branding, grammar, and format.
2018-05-10 10:32:12 -07:00
518fbb2631
Merge pull request #139 from MCamp859/edits-multi-boot-mint
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Copy edit of multi-boot-mint for branding, grammar, and format.
2018-05-10 10:31:50 -07:00
23362aafd8
Merge pull request #140 from MCamp859/edits-mb-restore-bl
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Copy edit of multi-boot-restore-bl for branding, grammar, and format.
2018-05-10 10:31:20 -07:00
0d68512d50
Removed sudo -s per review feedback.
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Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-05-10 13:14:41 -04:00
0ba295030d
Fixed underscores.
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2018-05-10 13:11:04 -04:00
1f42c8f112
Changed "modify" to "configure" in opening paragraph.
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2018-05-10 12:51:32 -04:00
65923ebcef
Completed review feedback.
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2018-05-10 11:17:19 -04:00
ec24e4107c
Completed review feedback.
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Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-05-10 11:08:40 -04:00
da6544ff03
Completed review feedback.
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2018-05-10 11:05:35 -04:00
dfb52b4aa6
Completed review feedback.
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Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-05-10 11:03:33 -04:00
5ffd3c34cc
Completed review feedback.
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2018-05-10 10:58:45 -04:00
15a029921c
Completed review feedback. Deferred figure N vs. Figure N.
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2018-05-10 10:51:22 -04:00
ae7a29ebe6
Copy edit of multi-boot-restore-bl for branding, grammar, and format.
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No deferred feedback from PR 108.
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2018-05-08 11:30:59 -04:00
229de087cb
Copy edit of multi-boot-mint for branding, grammar, and format.
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Completed feedback deferred from PR 108.
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2018-05-08 11:17:45 -04:00
4cf099a202
Copy edit of multi-boot-ubuntu for branding, grammar, and format.
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Completed feedback deferred from PR 108.
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2018-05-08 11:15:05 -04:00
16b74af76a
Copy edit of multi-boot-sles for branding, grammar, and format.
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Completed feedback deferred from PR 108.
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2018-05-08 11:12:09 -04:00
edca3ea8c0
Copy edit of multi-boot-rhel for branding, grammar, and format.
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Completed feedback deferred from PR 108.
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2018-05-08 11:09:29 -04:00
d1d6b29267
Copy edit of multi-boot-win for branding, grammar, and format.
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No deferred feedback from PR 108.
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2018-05-08 11:05:53 -04:00
164c96893e
Copy edit of multi-boot for branding, grammar, and format.
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Completed feedback deferred from PR 108.
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2018-05-08 10:56:53 -04:00
64c4bd9908
Merge pull request #108 from MCamp859/multiboot-edits
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Split multi-boot doc into small files, updated fig refs.
2018-04-30 09:32:22 -07:00
35082e2787
Implemented structural feedback in multi-boot.rst. Text edits deferred to next phase of updates.
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Reordered text and included CL details in multi-boot.rst.
Renamed “reset-bl” file references to “restore-bl” for clarity.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-23 14:13:59 -04:00
219b2c126a
update privacy policy reference link
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The intel privacy link was still not rendering correctly since the label had a "'s" in it. I renamed it to "Intel privacy policies"
2018-04-18 09:26:48 -07:00
48f0d5aabd
Fixed link in telemetry tutorial
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Updated the link for intel's privacy policy to https://www.intel.com/content/www/us/en/privacy/intel-privacy-notice.html
2018-04-17 09:35:00 -07:00
df4ebae60e
Split multi-boot doc into small files, updated fig refs.
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Added links to Detailed Procedures in main doc.
Renamed image files and figure numbers in text.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-10 16:32:37 -04:00
bd9630ea4c
Merge branch 'master' into smb
2018-04-09 10:50:40 -05:00
6525cfe218
Edited text to align with other tutorials.
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Added Prerequisites section.
Added sudo -s as first command and deleted sudo from other commands.
Edited text for active voice and consistency between steps.
Removed gerunds in headings.
Changed figure captions to remove gerunds and differentiate.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-03-29 11:48:39 -04:00
206ba54c33
Fix telemetry-backend rendering issue
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The bulleted list for the flask apps is not rendering correctly, add a line to correct this
2018-03-19 10:54:40 -07:00
7803558d92
Merge pull request #86 from joselamego/spark
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spark.rst: Add standalone-Spark use case tutorial
2018-03-15 13:41:26 -06:00
510b40fc3d
Completed requested edits.
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Added |CLOSIA|, removed incorrect option roles, added envvar role,
removed XML language in code blocks, and minor text edits.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-03-05 14:30:09 -05:00
62265b552c
Removed prompt character.
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2018-03-01 15:33:11 -05:00
314ac4215a
Update smb.rst
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I added "already" to make that sentence a bit more clear.
2018-02-28 11:33:25 -08:00
78ef0ebabc
smb.rst: Suggested grammar and rewording edits
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Scrubbed file for grammar and clarity.
Signed-off-by: Kristi Rifenbark <kristi@buzzcollectivemarketing.com >
2018-02-28 10:29:28 -08:00
f817a58066
Edited for grammar, format, and text flow.
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2018-02-28 11:38:19 -05:00
d824d9e446
aws-web: remove mention of -l parameter from text
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Changing explanatory text to match the given example command.
Signed-off-by: Brett T. Warden <brett.t.warden@intel.com >
2018-02-26 16:56:16 -08:00
6ff9bf4db1
Fix ssh username passing comment.
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Using `root@` and then `-l clear` is ambiguous.
2018-02-26 13:48:49 -08:00
2ec956e5a7
Edited for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
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2018-02-22 14:01:13 -05:00
c7487bba4a
Add SMB file sharing tutorial.
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Signed-off-by: Adams <eric.adams@intel.com >
2018-02-20 13:59:14 -08:00
26f525f7dc
Merge pull request #73 from tpleavitt/azure20
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Update the MS Azure Tutorial
2018-02-20 11:45:47 -06:00
5d945394cf
Fix minor markup and language issues.
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Signed-off-by: Rodrigo Caballero <rodrigo.caballero.abraham@intel.com >
2018-02-16 13:17:36 -06:00
e4a917545d
spark.rst: Add standalone-Spark use case tutorial
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Signed-off-by: Jose Lamego <jose.a.lamego@intel.com >
2018-02-14 19:58:35 +00:00
329407cb29
Fixed language and markup for clarity and consistency.
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Simplified language for clarity. Changed passive voice to active voice.
Modified code blocks' markup to future-proof content for Document Based
Testing.
Signed-off-by: Rodrigo Caballero <rodrigo.caballero.abraham@intel.com >
2018-02-13 10:59:22 -06:00
4503f1df5b
Fixed minor language issues and markup.
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Fixed some clarity and grammar issues.
Fixed the headings' markup to comply with the collaboration guideline.
2018-02-13 09:43:11 -06:00
30869c1fa3
Correct the default data directory references
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The default data directory for Apache is /var/www/html
in the latest version (tested on VERSION_ID=20490), instead
of /usr/share/httpd/htdocs as specified in the web-server-install
tutorial. This causes several inconsistencies in the "Change the
Default Configuration and Data Directory" section.
This commit updates the steps to configure a different data
directory for demostrative purposes (/var/www/tutorial) as the
proposed one (/var/www/html) is currently the default value.
As the rest of the document and the WordPress server tutorial
refers to /var/www/html, it's also necesary to add aditional steps
to return the configuration back to the original values to leave
it ready for the user to be able to follow the next steps in this
and the WordPress tutorials.
Signed-off-by: Jair Gonzalez <jair.de.jesus.gonzalez.plascencia@intel.com >
2018-01-29 12:28:36 -06:00
0d4b27e4ff
Change curly quotes for straight quotes
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In the "Change the Default Configuration and Data
Directory" section, the curly quotation marks in the
httpd.conf example cause service start errors when
the text is copied and pasted over directly to the new
httpd.conf file, as part of following the section's
steps.
This commit replaces the curly double quotes with straight
double quotes to correct the wrong behavior.
Signed-off-by: Jair Gonzalez <jair.de.jesus.gonzalez.plascencia@intel.com >
2018-01-29 12:28:36 -06:00
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