Copy edit of multi-boot-sles for branding, grammar, and format.

Completed feedback deferred from PR 108.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>

source/clear-linux/tutorials/multi-boot/multi-boot-sles.rst

@@ -1,7 +1,10 @@
 .. _multi-boot-sles:
 
-Install SUSE\* Linux Enterprise 12 SP2
-**************************************
+Install SUSE\* Linux Enterprise Server 12 SP2
+#############################################
+
+This guide describes SUSE-specific details of the :ref:`multi-boot`
+tutorial.
 
 #. Start the SUSE installer and follow the prompts.
 
@@ -10,14 +13,14 @@ Install SUSE\* Linux Enterprise 12 SP2
 
    .. figure:: figures/multi-boot-sles-1.png
 
-      Figure 1: SUSE: Suggested partitioning
+      Figure 1: SUSE: Suggested partitioning.
 
    **Optional:** Under :guilabel:`Available Storage on Linux` section,
    right-click the SUSE :file:`/home` partition and delete it. In this example, it is :file:`/dev/sda8`. See Figure 2.
 
    .. figure:: figures/multi-boot-sles-2.png
 
-      Figure 2: SUSE: Delete /home partition
+      Figure 2: SUSE: Delete /home partition.
 
 #. Under :guilabel:`Available Storage on Linux` section, right-click the SUSE
    root partition and resize it. In this example, :file:`/dev/sda7` is
@@ -25,13 +28,13 @@ Install SUSE\* Linux Enterprise 12 SP2
 
    .. figure:: figures/multi-boot-sles-3.png
 
-      Figure 3: SUSE: Resize root partition
+      Figure 3: SUSE: Resize root partition.
 
 #. Click :guilabel:`Accept`.
 
-#. Follow the remaining prompts to complete the installation of SUSE.
+#. Follow the remaining prompts to complete the SUSE installation.
 
-#. At this point, |CL| cannot boot because `Grub`
+#. At this point, you cannot boot |CL| because `Grub`
    is the default boot loader. Follow these steps to make the |CL|
    Systemd-Boot the default boot loader and add SUSE as a boot option:
 
@@ -39,32 +42,26 @@ Install SUSE\* Linux Enterprise 12 SP2
 
    #. Log in.
 
-   #. Get root privileges with the following command:
-
-      .. code-block:: console
-
-         $ sudo -s
-
-   #. Locate SUSE’s :file:`grub.cfg` in the :file:`/boot/grub2/` directory
-      and look for the primary SUSE :guilabel:`menuentry` section. The
-      highlighted lines identify the kernel, the :file:`initrd` filenames,
-      the root partition UUID, and the additional parameters used. Use this
-      information to create a new Systemd-Boot entry. See Figure 4.
+   #. Locate the SUSE :file:`grub.cfg` file in the :file:`/boot/grub2/` directory
+      and look for the primary SUSE :guilabel:`menuentry` section. In Figure 4, the
+      highlighted lines identify the kernel, the :file:`initrd` filenames, the
+      root partition UUID, and the additional parameters used. Use this information
+      to create a new Systemd-Boot entry for SUSE.
 
       .. figure:: figures/multi-boot-sles-4.png
 
-         Figure 4: SUSE: grub.cfg
+         Figure 4: SUSE: grub.cfg file.
 
    #. Copy the kernel and the :file:`initrd` file to the EFI partition.
 
-      .. code-block:: console
+      .. code-block:: bash
 
-         # cp /boot/vmlinuz-4.4.21-69-default /boot/efi
+         sudo cp /boot/vmlinuz-4.4.21-69-default /boot/efi
 
-         # cp /boot/initrd-4.4.21-69-default /boot/efi
+         sudo cp /boot/initrd-4.4.21-69-default /boot/efi
 
-   #. Create a boot entry for SUSE. The file must at least contain these
-      settings:
+   #. Create a boot entry for SUSE. At a minimum, the file must contain
+      these settings:
 
       +---------+---------------------------------------+
       | Setting | Description                           |
@@ -87,15 +84,15 @@ Install SUSE\* Linux Enterprise 12 SP2
 
       .. note:: The root partition UUID used below is unique to this example.
 
-         .. code-block:: console
+         .. code-block:: bash
 
-            # cd /boot/efi/loader/entries
+            sudo cd /boot/efi/loader/entries
 
-            # vi suse.conf
+            sudo vi suse.conf
 
          Add the following lines to the :file:`suse.conf` file:
 
-            .. code-block:: console
+            .. code-block:: bash
 
                title SUSE Linux Enterprise 12 SP2
 
@@ -110,18 +107,19 @@ Install SUSE\* Linux Enterprise 12 SP2
 
 #. Re-install Systemd-Boot to make it the default boot loader.
 
-   .. code-block:: console
+   .. code-block:: bash
 
-      # bootctl install --path /boot/efi
+      sudo bootctl install --path /boot/efi
 
    .. note::
       If an older version of SUSE does not have the `bootctl` command,
-      skip this step and see :ref:`multi-boot-restore-bl` to restore the |CL|
-      Systemd-Boot boot loader.
+      skip this step and see :ref:`multi-boot-restore-bl` to restore
+      Systemd-Boot.
 
 #. Reboot.
 
-If you want to install other OSes, refer to :ref:`multi-boot` for details. 
+If you want to install other :abbr:`OSes (operating systems)`, refer to
+:ref:`multi-boot` for details.
 
 
 .. _systemd boot loader documentation: