Minor grammatical edits made to vnc2 branch.

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
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:abbr:`VNC (Virtual Network Computing)` is a client-server GUI-based tool that
you use to remote-desktop to your |CLOSIA| host.
allows you to connect via remote-desktop to your |CLOSIA| host.
This guide shows you how to:
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ This guide shows you how to:
Install the VNC server and misc. components on your Clear Linux host
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To make VNC work on your |CL| host, you need to install these bundles:
To configure VNC to work on your |CL| host, install these bundles:
* `desktop-autostart`: Installs :abbr:`GDM (Gnome Desktop Manager)`, sets
it to start automatically on boot, and installs TigerVNC Viewer.
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ your host:
* - Attribute
- `Method 1`: Manually start a VNC session
- `Method 2`: Automatically start a VNC session via a systemd service script
- `Method 3`: Multi-user logins with authentication through GDM
- `Method 3`: Create multi-user logins with authentication through GDM
* - Description
- This is the traditional method where you SSH into the |CL| host, manually
start a VNC session to get a display ID, and connect to it by
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ preassigned unique display ID.
the :command:`vncpasswd` command before proceeding to the next step.
#. Start the VNC service script and set it to start automatically on
boot for each user. Substitute the [X] with the display ID.
boot for each user. Replace the [X] with the display ID.
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@@ -386,8 +386,7 @@ Install an SSH client
Establish a VNC connection to your Clear Linux host
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Steps to establishing a VNC connection depends on which VNC-server-configuration
method you chose.
Depending on the VNC-server-configuration method chosen, use the appropriate VNC connection:
If you chose `Method 1`, you must take a few extra steps by
using SSH to connect to your |CL| host and then manually launching VNC.