From d8cf6db3d82cd82dd4bfd51f9515f3516f3ba475 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mahoney Date: Thu, 3 May 2018 08:47:57 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Completed review feedback and incoporated changes. Signed-off-by: Mahoney --- .../guides/maintenance/enable-user-space.rst | 18 +++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/source/clear-linux/guides/maintenance/enable-user-space.rst b/source/clear-linux/guides/maintenance/enable-user-space.rst index 18ef954b..fb469811 100644 --- a/source/clear-linux/guides/maintenance/enable-user-space.rst +++ b/source/clear-linux/guides/maintenance/enable-user-space.rst @@ -7,10 +7,10 @@ This section provides steps to complete the following basic setup tasks for a newly installed |CLOSIA| system: * Create a new user. -* Install and update the OS software to its current version. +* Update the OS to its most current version using `swupd`. +* Install the most common applications for system administrators and developers using bundles. * Set up a new user and add the new user to the `wheel` group. - - * Install a GUI to test `sudo` privileges. +* Install a GUI to test `sudo` privileges. .. note:: Log in as the root user to complete the tasks in this @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Replace the with the name of the user account you want to create includ to enter a new password. Retype the new password for the new user account just created. -Install and update the OS software to its current version +Install and update software ********************************************************* |CL| has a unique application and architecture to add and update applications @@ -53,14 +53,14 @@ utility: .. note:: - The image installed may not be the latest version of |CL| available on + The image we installed may not be the latest version of |CL| available on the server. However, whenever the command :command:`swupd bundle-add ` runs, the OS is updated to the latest - available version. The website provides more `information about swupd`_. + available version. Our website provides more `information about swupd`_. -A full list of bundles and packages installed with the -`os-clr-on-clr`_ bundle is provided. Additionally, -`all Clear Linux bundles`_ is listed, active or deprecated. Click any bundle on the +We provide the full list of bundles and packages installed with the +`os-clr-on-clr`_ bundle. Additionally, we have listed +`all Clear Linux bundles`_, active or deprecated. Click any bundle on the list to view the manifest of the bundle. Set up a new user and add the new user to the `wheel` group