diff --git a/source/about.rst b/source/about.rst
index ecf7b33d..63bc1f06 100644
--- a/source/about.rst
+++ b/source/about.rst
@@ -3,75 +3,84 @@
About
#####
-|CL| is designed to deliver a secure, hardware optimized OS that is easy to
-keep up to date while ensuring that software dependencies remain mutually
-compatible.
+The |CL| delivers a secure, hardware optimized OS. Its easy updates ensure that
+software dependencies remain mutually compatible.
-This is accomplished through a number of custom infrastructure components and process innovations that make |CL| unique.
+|CL| does this via custom infrastructure components and process innovations.
.. contents::
:local:
:depth: 1
+
+For detailed information on these topics, refer to the :ref:`cl-guides` guides.
+
+
Release Cadence
***************
-|CL| updates are based on a rolling release that can occur daily but usually occur a few times per week. Each release has a unique version number that identifies every component in the OS from kernel, to driver, to tool, to GUI application. Most components are included in entities called :ref:`bundles-about`.
+|CL| updates are based on a rolling release that can occur daily but usually
+occurs a few times per week. Each release has a unique version number that
+identifies every component in the OS from kernel, to driver, to tool, to GUI
+application. Most components are included in entities called *bundles*.
Updates
*******
-Updates are made to ensure that the latest performance and security fixes are installed as soon as they are available. :ref:`swupd-guide` is the custom tool designed to manage updates and bundles.
+By default, |CL| automatically checks for updates, ensuring that the latest
+performance and security fixes are installed as soon as they are available.
+:ref:`swupd-guide` is the custom tool designed to manage updates and bundles.
+
+|CL| is :ref:`stateless` to make sure that system components can be updated
+without impacting user settings.
+
-|CL| is :ref:`stateless` to make sure that system components can be updated without impacting user settings.
-
Ease of Use
***********
-|CL| is designed to make a number of difficult problems easier to manage.
-:ref:`autoproxy` makes it possible for |CL| tools to operate in some proxy
-environments without needing to be configured.
+|CL| makes it easier to manage a number of difficult problems.
-Being :ref:`stateless` means that configuration settings are easier to manage and remain untouched when system sofware is updated.
+* :ref:`autoproxy` makes it possible for |CL| tools to operate in some proxy
+ environments without needing to be configured.
-:ref:`swupd-guide` also makes it easy to manage software and maintain compatibility.
+* Being :ref:`stateless` means that configuration settings are easier to manage
+ and remain untouched when system sofware is updated.
+
+* :ref:`swupd-guide` also makes it easy to manage software and maintain
+ compatibility.
Custom Derivatives
******************
-The same tooling that the |CL| team uses can be used to create a custom distribution that continues to benefit from rolling releases.
+The same tools used to build the |CL| are available *in* the OS. These tools can
+be used to create a custom distribution that continues to benefit from upstream
+rolling releases.
.. figure:: /_figures/clear-lifecycle.png
:scale: 75%
:align: center
- :alt: Creating and Managing a Clear Linux* OS (or derivative) Version
-
- Figure 1: Creating and managing a Clear Linux\* OS (or derivative) version
+ :alt: Creating and managing a Clear Linux* OS version (or derivative)
+ Figure 1: Creating and managing a Clear Linux\* OS version (or derivative)
Create
======
-You will need to understand how to use :ref:`autospec` and :ref:`mixer`
-to create a custom distribution.
+To create a custom distribution you need to understand how to use the
+:ref:`autospec` and :ref:`mixer` tools.
Additional training materials are available in the `how-to-clear`_ GitHub\*
project to help you get started with |CL| tools.
-To complete the training, you will need a clean |CL| installation and a
-network connection. The project includes all files needed to complete the
-exercises.
-
Deploy
======
We also provide training on how to :ref:`deploy-at-scale`.
-
+
Administrate
============
-:ref:`telem-guide` provides a method of collecting useful information about a |CL| deployment, and there are also :ref:`debug` capabilities.
-
-
+|CL| provides a :ref:`telem-guide` solution for collecting useful information
+about a deployment, as well as :ref:`debug` capabilities.
.. _how-to-clear: https://github.com/clearlinux/how-to-clear
diff --git a/source/guides/index.rst b/source/guides/index.rst
index 1c17266b..38d63b65 100644
--- a/source/guides/index.rst
+++ b/source/guides/index.rst
@@ -9,6 +9,8 @@ The following guides provide step-by-step instructions on using |CL|.
As of 22 May 2019 :file:`mixin` is no longer supported.
+.. _cl-guides:
+
Clear Linux
===========
diff --git a/source/index.rst b/source/index.rst
index 7acd0328..cab854a7 100644
--- a/source/index.rst
+++ b/source/index.rst
@@ -5,35 +5,38 @@
Welcome to the |CL-ATTR| documentation pages, the source for |CL| documentation.
-.. raw:: html
-
-
-
Our documentation is divided into the following sections:
+
:ref:`get-started`
- If you are new to |CL|, get started fast with tutorials for installing |CL|
- on bare metal, in a virtual environment, or as a live image on a USB stick.
+
+ If you are new to |CL|, get started quickly with step-by-step instructions for installing |CL| on bare metal, in a virtual environment, or as a live image on a USB stick.
:ref:`about`
- Clear Linux is a little different from other distros. Here are some
- important tools and concepts for managing your install.
+
+ |CL| is different from other Linux distributions.
+
+ Updates, ease of use, and custom derivatives are a few of the differences this section explains. Orient yourself to these differences and why they matter to you.
:ref:`guides`
- Guides show how to complete common tasks that help you leverage |CL| native
- features effectively. From basic system configuration to advanced
- management of a cloud installation, there is a guide for you.
-:ref:`tutorials`
- |CL| tutorials provide step-by-step instructions on how |CL| features can
- be used and extended, frequently with third-party tools.
+ Guides cover a range of topics from |CL| features and tooling, to system maintenance, network, and stacks.
+
+:ref:`Use Cases `
+
+ Sample use cases, with step-by-step instructions, show how to set up third-party tools and software with |CL|.
:ref:`reference`
- Find the detailed information you need to enable your configuration or task
- in our |CL| reference section.
+
+ The reference section contains supplemental information in support of |CL| configuration, system requirements, and contributions.
:ref:`faq`
- Refer to our FAQ section to read commonly asked questions and answers.
+
+ The FAQ section provides answers to commonly asked questions about |CL|.
+
+.. raw:: html
+
+
.. toctree::
:maxdepth: 2